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Borra Week - Journey pg. 7

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Final page. If I actually had the patience and dedication for comics, I'd to do just random, non-linear comics about Korra and Bolin's journeys together. I mean, they wouldn't be alone, I imagine Jinora would go with them since Korra still hasn't finished her airbending training. Pabu would be there too. :3 Korra would have to face the fact that her and Mako's relationship isn't perfect and deal with her developing feelings for Bolin.

Mako would have to stay behind in Republic City because of his obligation to his new job as a police officer. And as much as I love Asami and would like her to go along, she would have to watch over her company and this would also give rise to the chance that she and Mako could fix the RELATIONSHIP THAT WAS PERFECT UNTIL MAKO DECIDED TO BE AN IDIOT AND BETRAY WHO I TRULY BELIEVE TO BE THE PERFECT GIRL. Since he's still in a relationship with Korra however, this would merely be Mako and Asami growing closer together as friends and human beings. (And Mako fighting off the sexual tension he feels between them.)

If you want, you can also imagine this even happening after the second season. (Minus the Mako and Asami stuff, because after Mako pulled that shit in the second season I don't know if I want them to be together. Asami deserves better... But they were so perfect Mako why...)

I know there's a lot of things wrong with the comic. Like how I completely neglected to use perspective lines for anything, and was basically really lazy with a lot of things... Did you even LOOK at the lines of my panels? *shudder* There were dialogue changes that should have been made, character positioning that should have been moved around, and panels that should have been there, but weren't. I know... I know...

Basically, after almost a year of working on this comic (mind you most of it was procrastination) I got really lazy and I'm really disappointed in myself for doing so, because I love this idea so much and it's my first real comic and I love Borra so much I wanted everything to be perfect. But it's not... And I'm angry at myself for not caring enough to fix it. So... I know my mistakes, but if there's anything I did well I wouldn't mind knowing...

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